Weak.

There's no denying you have talent when it comes to drawing but all I see here is a sloppy, uncompelling trailer to something I don't know enough about to care about. Seems like you've taken a lot of cues from the Dark Tower books. Good luck on the next episode, hopefully more exposition will be drawn out.

Keep at it.

Flesh this baby out with color, backgrounds, sound effects and/or background music, maybe a little longer and I'd say you have front page material. Keep it up, Spidey RULZ. Peace.

OMFG, that was terrific.

Excellent sequal, love how witty this is. You've brought to life the comic spirit and fandom very nicely. It's awesome to see a spoof of this quality about the X-Men. Can't wait to see more. Loved the Juggy/Squidboy cameo, I miss him too... *tear*